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Genies one wish

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Genies one wish
A genie story

This is not like other stories. Well not stories humens are use to, but is well known in genie history. It gose back before humens ever lived, when there was only genies on earth. Allow me to tell you the story before we really begine my story. Along ago Genies lived but were Gins, they did not need a bottle or a lamp and had endless power. but they were lonely and wanted mortals as friends. so the first Gin greated man and women. They lived in peace with each other for many decades, but humen hearts became heavy with greed and desires, so they were able to trick the Gins into vessals, male Gins to oil lamps and female Gins to perfume bottles. That is when they became known as genies and had to serve to be relased from there vessals. But hear I am yapping away like always. silly me. My name is Rachel and this is my story haha not genie history lesson.
Hmm lets see, thats right might as well start at the beginng, thats usely how humens do this.  It all started about 10 years ago. I was at collage working on a 3d Graphic design degree, I know, I know sooo orginal, but I was young and wanted to do something that was popular. Oh haha Did I forget to mention I am genie now, see I lose my train of thaught all the time haha. but yeah back to what happen. I was dating this girl Names Stacey, yes I dated another girl. I was sturggiling threw school I hated computers haha still do actualy. but struggiling threw school and I use to love going shopping for old stuff, and even back then I wanted a genie bottle, So I go this store and this old man, he walked with a cain and I could barly understand him. I was looking tired and worn out like ran threw a wringer a few times, from all the work work work it was insain. He asked me, why do you look so stressed. I know no reason to lie so I answeared his question, I was like they got me running ragged at the collage I never get any sleep plus I would just like to get ahead in life you know, it seems like every time you take one step foward you ended up falling on your butt 2 steps back. all he did was nod at me  while I spoke like a grandfather passing out on you. but then he spoke. Seems like you need a little excitment in your life, I bet you are thinking what I was thinking, like whoa to old grampa and your not my type. but it was like he knew what I was thinking, but also could have been the look I was giving haha. he was like thats not what I mean I mean some adventure and magic too, hmm you seem like the magic type. let me guess you like genies. which that took me by complet surprise to say the lease. I was like yes sir i do but how did you know. he was like, well I can sence it and I got just the thing for you. he comes out with what looked like a clear bottle, no detail or nothing just a clear bottle almost like old milk bottle shape. he handed it to me and it changed colors to pink but still the same shape. I was like mood bottle cool beans. he then said now listen very carefully. never open this bottle cause it seems to like you. it will bring you luck. but remember never open it! I am like yeah yeah I get it, and I am thinking he is going to charge me a arm and leg for it. but I was wrong he sold it to me for 1 dollar. thats right 1 buck. I was like, a mood bottle worth it. so I paid and all and went home Stacey was waiting for me and looked upset that baught some other useless junk. but I smoothed it all over. that night I had werid dreams of being inside the bottle and granting wishs, it was totaly werid to me then. but when I awoke I felt so refreshed like best sleep I had in a long time. and the day went even better too. everyone was supper nice to me and even the vending machine gave me a free soda and chex mix. Even the sun seemed brighter to me and more colorful, the air smelled sweeter then it has in years for me. so after such a wounderful day I went to sleep and had the same dreams again. next day samething it was getting to werid after a week of this. so I went back to the store and like every other movie. it was shut down., to be honest it looked shut down for years not a week. it had cowbwebs and dusty. I thaught I was losing my mind. I got in my car and drove home thinking maybe I made a mistake on wear it was or something. Me being the curoius type I was thinking why not open the bottle. if it is bring me such good luck, maybe there was a genie inside or something, I know it sounds crazy but after the store and that week anything sounded normal to me. you could have said Pugs are green and they fly south for the winter and I would have been like, hmm there might be something to that. so there I was tring to get the bottle to open the stopper was like fused on which was werid since it looked kind of lose. but after some much yanking and twisting and pulling it poped off and it first nothing
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DominiqueMelted's avatar
I know you warned us not to dwell on your grammar, syntax and spelling, so I won't. :-) So far, you have the beginnings of an interesting story -- you've introduced elements that make the reader want to continue reading:
What happens with the bottle?
What happens with Stacey?
What about the old man?
Do you remain in college?
Will we find out more about your genie fixation?
Will you give more detailed history of the the time when Gins ruled the realm?

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